The Order of Things

Jess Rinker

May 23, 2024

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or a mini lecture on writing dialogue

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Kathryn Craft

May 23, 2024

Are you too picky? No. I would have removed “she yelled” too. 😂

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hahaha--I ALSO thought that, but kept it for illustrative purposes.

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Glad you’re enjoying the work!

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The Order of Things